(Original Manga) A thousand year Story Pg. 1

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Well the first page of my original Manga 'a thousand year story'
it is great to draw a story..You reply all the time in your head, actually this is my very first manga and I have to learn a lot so I hope to get better soon at it, this ( & the 2nd) pages are like test pages to me, they show the beginning of the story.I colored this page very basically

Maybe it's confusing why there is no introduce to the characters yet...Well there is one on the coming up second page, still I want to fix on the characters on this page!
The story is about Kyori a little girl who has to fight her terrible destiny (don't want to tell everything yet), the first pages are about her parents meet, before she was born, to understand the upcoming plot. ^-^/

I hope you like it~

By the way I think only to color some pages (next one is in color too) but does someone know something like Manga editor for free? I want my pages look like a real manga, but I don't have the right things yet



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